11-02-2014, 07:05 PM
I'm willing to help newbs but please when I give you advice, TAKE IT. I'm not really a fan of " " and * * but I'll admit I do it because I don't know how to explain to someone what I mean by first person only. It's a role play not a book. If you want to say *I touch your firm warm baby bump* well why not just write wow your bump feels so firm, I didn't think you'd start showing this soon. (Or whatever.)