01-21-2019, 10:59 AM
(hmm, i know this would come out rude. But well, I prefer rping in the style that we predominantly control our own character. I'm not opposed to some small gestures, say you could decide when Muarice would step in to the room and join Nate. You could add in those details to make the story appear more complete, and you are very much welcome to. But I prefer with Maurice's major moves, such as when he's gonna kiss Nate or something like that to be left for me to ...hmm... decide? if that's the proper word? You could just leave Maurice's part out, and i would respond to that adding in details of how Maurice reacted in my reply?
that said, i really like how you make them drenched with the sprinkler! really cute.
LOL i hope i wouldn't make you mad with that request... )
Maurice smiled seeing the enthusiasm. There was a striking resemblance between the timid animals and Nate. Nate was shy and soft, fluffy as well. The rabbits must have sensed that for they responded to nate's patting positively.
Maurice joined his husband and his smile widened seeing Nate was already patting the rabbits so fondly, looking rather excited and carefree for the first time since they met. He mimicked what Nate was doing on the rabbits, doing it on Nate himself. That pure smile nate was giving him took his breath away, and the alpha could no longer resist the temptation.
He pulled Nate closer to him and kissed him. He started off gentle, just prying and knocking on Nate's soft lips, then knocked on his lips with his tongue. He snaked his way into Nate's when Nate parted them whimpering, and took advantage of the weakening defence from Nate to pry open his mouth, exploring every inch of his sweet-tasting insides.
In their passionate snogging, the rabbits had leapt away cleverly to escape from the water - leaving only them getting thoroughly wet from the sprinkler.
Maurice was also laughing whole-heartedly and... well, what a ridiculous picutre they made. the gatekeeper who'd brought them rabbits' feed comewaving at them, urging them to move away. Maurice removed his jacket and used it to shield Nate from the water, holding it above their heads. "Let's run!"
They made a dash to the pavilion int he middle of the courtyard, and burst into another fit of laughter.
"Oh god, we're all messed up." Maurice brushed away, as much as he could, water on Nate. THe gatekeeper had joined them and offered towels to dry them. "Thanks. Would you be so kind as to guide us to the nearest place where we can tidy ourselves?" he asked the gatekeeper politely, wrapping Nate up first before pulling on a towel himself.
that said, i really like how you make them drenched with the sprinkler! really cute.
LOL i hope i wouldn't make you mad with that request... )
Maurice smiled seeing the enthusiasm. There was a striking resemblance between the timid animals and Nate. Nate was shy and soft, fluffy as well. The rabbits must have sensed that for they responded to nate's patting positively.
Maurice joined his husband and his smile widened seeing Nate was already patting the rabbits so fondly, looking rather excited and carefree for the first time since they met. He mimicked what Nate was doing on the rabbits, doing it on Nate himself. That pure smile nate was giving him took his breath away, and the alpha could no longer resist the temptation.
He pulled Nate closer to him and kissed him. He started off gentle, just prying and knocking on Nate's soft lips, then knocked on his lips with his tongue. He snaked his way into Nate's when Nate parted them whimpering, and took advantage of the weakening defence from Nate to pry open his mouth, exploring every inch of his sweet-tasting insides.
In their passionate snogging, the rabbits had leapt away cleverly to escape from the water - leaving only them getting thoroughly wet from the sprinkler.
Maurice was also laughing whole-heartedly and... well, what a ridiculous picutre they made. the gatekeeper who'd brought them rabbits' feed comewaving at them, urging them to move away. Maurice removed his jacket and used it to shield Nate from the water, holding it above their heads. "Let's run!"
They made a dash to the pavilion int he middle of the courtyard, and burst into another fit of laughter.
"Oh god, we're all messed up." Maurice brushed away, as much as he could, water on Nate. THe gatekeeper had joined them and offered towels to dry them. "Thanks. Would you be so kind as to guide us to the nearest place where we can tidy ourselves?" he asked the gatekeeper politely, wrapping Nate up first before pulling on a towel himself.