07-09-2016, 12:24 AM
Tobias pressed the cloth over the wound, closing his eyes and groaning. "I feel sick...." he He muttered, looking worriedly at Ben. The burning pain from the wound was spreading.
(You gotta give me more interaction. More dialogue. I feel like I'm carrying more of the plot.)
(You gotta give me more interaction. More dialogue. I feel like I'm carrying more of the plot.)