02-08-2016, 07:36 PM
Tobias eyed the heavy book and found he couldn't muster anything to say about it for now. Perhaps the massive pregnancy weighed down his mind as well as his body, who could say? He decided to focus on the story instead. "Uh...regarding the story, it seems a little short? I know you had to gloss over a few details, but you're explaining how we came to love each other, right? Maybe you could go into that a little more in a sneaky way. Like you 'opened my eyes' to what I wanted, or something like that."
He suddenly felt very self-conscious about making recommendations for something his husband worked on so much. "I-I'm not sure, really. All the other stuff is great, but maybe it needs a little more substance to how we met. That's all."
He suddenly felt very self-conscious about making recommendations for something his husband worked on so much. "I-I'm not sure, really. All the other stuff is great, but maybe it needs a little more substance to how we met. That's all."